If I Changed

If I Changed

3.1K Reads 58 Votes 11 Part Story
Heather Federow By xxxheathermariexxx Updated Jul 20, 2011

Alexis is the new girl in her new school. The past year has been terrible for her. She has lost her brother and boyfriend. She is trying to fit in to her new school now. But there's one problem. She's emo. What would happen if she changed? How would she change?

Partypip19 Partypip19 Jun 22, 2011
YAY! Kwl!!! BTW just letting you know that you wrote 5:55 inted of what i think sould have been 7:55.? just thought i should tell ya! can't wait to read next chap. ill get round to it sometime tonight cause right now im busy.
Partypip19 Partypip19 Jun 22, 2011
Aw that's so sad. :( no offence but the first part of this chap could have used a bit more description. but I still love this begining can't wait to read more!! XD <3
katiekat katiekat Feb 13, 2011
I like it but the end of the chapter could be more of an ending like instead you could have been like my mother walked in and gasped then thats it 
                              
                              btw before you think what a biotch im a critic so yeah