A Broken Alliance

A Broken Alliance

650 Reads 34 Votes 7 Part Story
Edmund By darkmoonlight Completed

The full moon was the only light to shine during the freezing, bitter night. I grasped my shakey hands around the handle of my long spear. I was preparing to give her the final blow to the heart until I realized I wasn't a cold hearted killer. I couldn't kill this man unless I had a reason to prove his gulit. Even though my training was all for this moment. To bring "peace" to our humble land. I turned my sword around  and skillfully put it back in its holder as I walked away finally realizing who the real traitor was, a tear fell from my eye and landed on the powdered snow.

BeccaM16XoXo BeccaM16XoXo Feb 06, 2011
NOt what i normally read but its really good and i enjoyed it :) Keep writing <3
trishthewriter trishthewriter Feb 06, 2011
This is not normally the kind of story I'd pick up and read, but you're a great writer. You know your target audience well and your story is going to connect with them. Great start. Keep going. 
gothchic9898 gothchic9898 Feb 05, 2011
EDDY THIS IS LEXY AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME I LOVE IT!!!!!!! ALSO BECOME MY FAN CUZ I NOW AM A FAN OF U AHAHHAAAHA!!!!!
vantablack vantablack Feb 05, 2011
That quote from their king in the beginning was excellent. I couldn't help but agree with it.