Penance

Penance

161 Reads 30 Votes 4 Part Story
H.C. Townes By HCTownes Updated Oct 20, 2017

The only thing stronger than an eight-hundred year old vampire is the pain and regret he carries with him. Follow Jack Rossi as he realizes that one cannot outrun the past and when it catches up to you, there will be hell to pay.

  • bloodsucker
  • ninja
  • pain
  • regret
  • romance
  • swords
  • vamp
  • vampire
HCTownes HCTownes Jul 10, 2017
Well, that's the good part of starting a huge novel in the 1200's. It makes for a ton of research.
_Somethinggreater_ _Somethinggreater_ Aug 29, 2017
another beautifully written chapter, brimming with history and culture to boot. I feel like you could write the reader into any scene without even trying. great work!
Michael5775 Michael5775 Jul 10, 2017
Well written. Can't wait for the next chapter. The characters are developed very nicely.
_Somethinggreater_ _Somethinggreater_ Aug 29, 2017
This opening is emotionally charged, Jack and Lana clearly love and trust each other to become 'one'.  Looking forward to seeing what is on the horizon.
Michael5775 Michael5775 Jun 19, 2017
Well written macabre love story. Can't wait for next chapter.
DanielBBarr DanielBBarr Jul 10, 2017
love the amount of history involved in this, can't wait for the next one!