Shh... It's a Secret

Shh... It's a Secret

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melbastien By melbastien Completed

Who said keeping a friend’s secret is easy? Especially when your friend is the secret. 

Emma moves across the country to live with her Uncle for senior year only to realize that two members of her favorite band (including her celebrity crush, Tobias) are secretly living next door. There’s only one problem, she can’t tell anyone.

For a famous rock star, Tobias has a lot of secrets. Secrets that only his best friend and co-band member knows. When his bands’ label have them working on their next album where his father still lives, Tobias is thrilled to spend time with his neighbor and mentor unbeknownst to the tabloids that’s been following him nearly everywhere since he became famous. Little did he know that his biggest secret, the girl he never could get out of his mind, is there as well. 

Now Emma and Tobias get to know each other, become friends and maybe something more while trying to keep their relationship a secret to both Emma’s new friends and the tabloids.


********* 2nd place of the Best Book Award 2014 in Teen Fiction **********

v__nikolaou v__nikolaou May 29
I don't know who to imagine them like. One Direction, 5SOS or the Vamps? I love all three!
ciaralikesthings ciaralikesthings Jul 01, 2015
Trinity is the main point and college in Dublin and they're from Ireland, coincidence much???? Also, I'M FROM IRELAND TOO!!!!!!!!!!
AlyssaVienesseTan AlyssaVienesseTan Aug 28, 2014
Tobias.... Bloody heck, whenever I think about that time I remember Four. XD 
                              
                              Ooohkay, I love the protagonist! She's really interesting and isn't really a one dimensional character. Waking up in the morning isn't really the best way to start, but at least it's not an alarm clock. :P
Shagun_Randhawa Shagun_Randhawa Aug 27, 2014
I like the main character's background - really gives her three dimensionality and makes her very likable. Great first chapter.
Kathaleeya Kathaleeya Aug 07, 2014
I like the setup you've managed to create so far, and I love the fact you made her dad a Marine. I'm guessing that when she goes to her uncles place that Tobias will also be there. Just my prediction.
Rexann Rexann Jul 28, 2014
I love celebrity stories! This was an amazing start, hooked me to the story right away! One suggestion though is that you should end your dialogues with a comma instead of a period. :)