Dark Spirals {On Hold}

Dark Spirals {On Hold}

1.4K Reads 66 Votes 4 Part Story
Cat By Surryeon Updated Feb 17, 2016

{Put on hold because I am not currently updating this.}

City girl Harper Sorrowful moves to the small town of Knightsen, CA. She wanted the quiet life after being kidnapped and being held hostage for ransom that her parents refused to pay. 

Motorcycle Club leader Christos isn't your normal guy. He's different then the other super naturals that you've heard of... He's a hybrid, the second one in existence. His Father was the other one. Dark Spirals is his club.

Meeting for the first time at his bar, Iron Spira. A couple hours later they are attacked by the Black Thorns motorcycle club. Pure Werewolves that dislike Christos. 

Having been shot in the back Harper lays dying, Christos on the other hand has a plan for her. He turns her... But into what?

  • club
  • fantasy
  • hybrid
  • motorcycle
  • supernatural
  • vampire
HopeWinters_ HopeWinters_ Mar 20, 2014
Awh that was emotional! A little confusing with what was happening upstairs - maybe a spelling error or something? 
                              
                              But this keeps the reader intrigue and I like it :)
HopeWinters_ HopeWinters_ Mar 20, 2014
Interesting start, a few errors here and there but nothing to big :) 
                              
                              Questions at the end of summaries do make people interested and want to continue reading, but only if they're done right. I think you've left it open with only 2 obvious questions :P 
                              
                              But nevertheless I want to check this out :)