Saving Marie

Saving Marie

14.7K Reads 174 Votes 20 Part Story
readerwriterlover16 By readerwriterlover16 Completed

Marie Greene is running from her Uncle who is out to kill her and her two brothers Jeremy and Bain. They run to her brother's best friends house for protection and an escape. The abuse that Marie and her brothers endured makes her have a hard time letting anyone in but, can a certain guy break through that barrier? With there mad Uncle out to get them can Marie see the love of her life right in front of her and willing to protect her or will she lose the only person that can save her and her heart.

WitchesBrew2 WitchesBrew2 Aug 22, 2014
its good so far but there are a lot of grammatical errors which trust me I do all the time.
TheEnigma TheEnigma Jun 16, 2011
Wow, really nice first chapter. Very touching... and just very good overall. Can't wait to read the rest after I've had a good night' sleep. I cant believe thi hasn't got more reads and votes... seriously... well, keep it up and I'm sure it'll get noticed somewhere along the line. :D