Black Arrow (Lab Rats/ Chase Davenport Fan Fiction)

Black Arrow (Lab Rats/ Chase Davenport Fan Fiction)

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Rebecca By Kiss_Me_Sweetie Completed

My name is Luna Cortéz and I've got a big secret. I'm friends with the Davenport kids and Bree is the only one who knows about my secret. I live alone in my house because my mom is a workaholic and she barely even notice me, but she doesn't either know about my secret. You're probobly wondering ´what's your secret?´. Well, I am Black Arrow. Not exactly a hero but when the Davenports go on their missions, I kinda join the party without the invitation. I help through out the whole mission but Mr. Davenport thinks I'm trying to ruin it. So now everytime I go on their missions, I gotta watch out for Chase and Adam, Because Bree is on my side. Wish me luck!

Luna reminds me of Harry Potter and Cortéz  reminds me of Spy Kids
CAUSE IIIIIIIIIIIIII'M.  FRRRAAGGGIIIIIIIILE
                              
                              AND YYYOOOOOOOOOUUUUU KNOW THHIIIIIIIIS
                              SOOO HOLDDDD ME, WRAP ME IN LOVE, FILL UP MY CUP
                              EEMMMPPPTYYYYY
                              CUZ ONLY YO LOVE CAN FILL UP MY CUP
                              CUZ IM HOLLLOOWWWWWWWW
                              OH-oh-OH
Man they're always so mean to each other in this show.... Lol. Poor Leo.
Ella9162 Ella9162 Mar 22
I think it's supposed to say "were" not "was". Tell me if I'm getting annoying saying so many corrections. I'll probably stop, I don't want to annoy you.
can i edit this for you? i'm not trying to be rude or anything. i just find editing stories fun.
Ella9162 Ella9162 Mar 22
Is it ok if I let you know about grammatical errors? If so this sentence doesn't make sense. I think it should say people instead.