Beila (1812)

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SleepyZombie33 By SleepyZombie33 Updated 3 years ago
*Historical Fiction, 1812* 
    
    A series of letters addressed to Beila, written by her father, who is a French soldier during Napoleon's invasion of Russia. He retells his experiences to her. 
    
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    Writers Note: Just and idea that came into my head, the two characters (Beila, and Jacques) are fictional. Each chapter is relatively short, but that's the way I want it to be. I apologize for any historical inaccuracies.
GAH i wrote this so many times and it wont post!! 
                                    Ok, the start is good, it explains jis experiences, but id like to see more of his emotions building up. It has a strong sense of the 'history' part. All in all it's pretty good but, its just my opinion since i dont enjoy historixal fiction.
GAH i wrote this so many times and it wont post!! 
                                    Ok, the start is good, it explains jis experiences, but id like to see more of his emotions building up. It has a strong sense of the 'history' part. All in all it's pretty good but, its just my opinion since i dont enjoy historixal fiction.
GAH i wrote this so many times and it wont post!! 
                                    Ok, the start is good, it explains jis experiences, but id like to see more of his emotions building up. It has a strong sense of the 'history' part. All in all it's pretty good but, its just my opinion since i dont enjoy historixal fiction.
GAH i wrote this so many times and it wont post!! 
                                    Ok, the start is good, it explains jis experiences, but id like to see more of his emotions building up. It has a strong sense of the 'history' part. All in all it's pretty good but, its just my opinion since i dont enjoy historixal fiction.
GAH i wrote this so many times and it wont post!! 
                                    Ok, the start is good, it explains jis experiences, but id like to see more of his emotions building up. It has a strong sense of the 'history' part. All in all it's pretty good but, its just my opinion since i dont enjoy historixal fiction.
GAH i wrote this so many times and it wont post!! 
                                    Ok, the start is good, it explains jis experiences, but id like to see more of his emotions building up. It has a strong sense of the 'history' part. All in all it's pretty good but, its just my opinion since i dont enjoy historixal fiction.