Things happen and plans can change. The Piece of Eden is a mysterious thing and it shouldn't be trifled with. AltairxOc MalikxOc :: co-written with DreamingOokami
@XxPhenixRiderxX A story shouldn't always be about 'action'. Plus, it was the intro chapter and is setting up for the story ahead.
You can't just lead into things and expect it to be good. It takes time to make a good story.