It happened one night

It happened one night

4.5K Reads 124 Votes 1 Part Story
Hafsa By hafsa_indie Completed

Susan's parents are out of town and she is alone with her friends when she is visited by an unexpected stranger.....

Mystofer Mystofer Jun 01, 2016
Loved it! Had a cliche hollywood movie (scream,friday the 12th etc)feeling to it which I totally love!lol
                              Please write a sequel!
teresa2580 teresa2580 May 10, 2015
I take it that you're not doing a sequel hun? it's a very awesome story i for one would love to see what will happen next. :)
ewaldron30 ewaldron30 Aug 07, 2012
I loved this story! Poor Bruno! This scared the shiz out of me though!
JaredFalcone JaredFalcone Aug 06, 2012
Awesome! Good job on this story I think you should make a sequel(:
queenieB queenieB Jul 15, 2012
Oh my god, what a dramatic twist! This story is defo the best I have read on this site. What happened to Bruno though? Did they bury him? Nice story 5/5. XxxxxX QueenieB
realmesneha realmesneha May 22, 2012
This was a very good thriller, better than babysitter (:P) Btw, i want you to write more horror stories.