Susan's parents are out of town and she is alone with her friends when she is visited by an unexpected stranger.....
I take it that you're not doing a sequel hun? it's a very awesome story i for one would love to see what will happen next. :)
I loved this story! Poor Bruno! This scared the shiz out of me though!
Awesome! Good job on this story I think you should make a sequel(:
Oh my god, what a dramatic twist! This story is defo the best I have read on this site. What happened to Bruno though? Did they bury him? Nice story 5/5. XxxxxX QueenieB
This was a very good thriller, better than babysitter (:P) Btw, i want you to write more horror stories.
Why Bruno?!? The people, whatever, but the dog??? (tears, tears) Haha JK this was awesome though!