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The Alpha's Weakness

The Alpha's Weakness

119K Reads 4.3K Votes 13 Part Story
Arlefyy By Arlefyy Updated Jun 25, 2015

Sil is a beautiful, loving, caring she-wolf. She had the perfect life in her loving pack. Until her pack is suddenly attacked. She manages to escape and is forced to run away from the life she once knew. Having no idea why or who was after her, she becomes a rogue a thing she detested the most. She wanted to stay hidden, live a normal human life and hopefully heal from the pain of losing everything. But of course fate is never easy to avoid for she runs into none other than Alpha Ashton Black, her mate. 

Alpha Ashton Black had no weaknesses. He is ruthless, intimidating, harsh and above all cruel. No one dared to attack his pack. Not even rogues, no one… until now.

CloeHeart CloeHeart Oct 08, 2015
I haven't read it quite yet, but I was wondering if maybe you could take the story out of the bold? It's distracting and kind of hurts my eyes. I'll comment again when I read.
XxVaderxX XxVaderxX Sep 10, 2015
i think your style is great and the sentences run smooth and it's a good start that makes me want to keep reading.
TesjaEmoni TesjaEmoni May 24, 2015
this book sounds good so far i think i'm really going to enjoy it 
peoplethatiusetoknow peoplethatiusetoknow Apr 04, 2015
I believe that every grammar acceptable book deserves a comment so HERE I AM DORY
TheLostAndFoundPile TheLostAndFoundPile Aug 24, 2014
Your writing is really good I am already liking her character it seems badass yet cocky :P her mate will come soon and she ain't gonna like it. Man Jason needs to learn to take a hint! Loved the chapter!