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Pen Your Pride
A living Hell

A living Hell

72.8K Reads 763 Votes 17 Part Story
Melody By Gunsss Completed

A story about a girl sold in to the sex trade with a troubling past.

-EDIT; most chapters have had small changes, the largest one is in the last one, i hoped you guys liked reading this as it is now complete-

I have begun more edits to this story... I might post them now or wait until I feel like the edits are complete..

  • depressive
  • ending
  • happy
  • hell
  • sex-slave
  • story
  • suicides
My_Unreality My_Unreality Oct 31, 2017
Wouldn't you die if you were 50 lbs? I know it's not healthy to be under even 100 lbs at that age so I'm just guessing you'd probably die at 50lbs
darcendarc darcendarc Apr 04, 2017
'Never bothered learning the name' wow. Just wow
                              Seriously delete this sentence
redpandagirl2008 redpandagirl2008 2 days ago
Don't smoke do drugs or drink alcohol......and find a better job than a strip club bro
JobeBury JobeBury May 17, 2015
Short and abrasive text patterns set a cold and 'almost dead' reality mood, I feel the way you've written it paces through each emotion two quickly, some part this is used to your and vantage of the telling of the story other part need to be fleshed out more. All in all really good.
AronLinde AronLinde Mar 15, 2015
very abrupt if thats the word.story feels alittle rushed. but the fact that the main character is so broken is a pulling factor....she doesnt want to escape....she wants to die. but will she? thats why im reading this now :P
CiatraLongings CiatraLongings Feb 21, 2015
This is really Interesting. I love ow there's no dialouge, just this hazy flashback sort of thing. And the end of the chapter was good as well. There was a typo though, taking about her mother's death, 'water' is spelled wrong.