Eternal Embrace

Eternal Embrace

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Christina Beck By christinatryphena Completed

How far would you go to be with the one you loved? Kate is getting ready for her beloved husband to return from world war 2 but she doesn't know how shes going to release her secret to him. She hasn't been in contact with him in over three years. How far will she go to make sure they last forever.

christinatryphena christinatryphena Feb 03, 2011
@VAaddict Thank you, it means so much. I was hoping to generate some sort of emotion :) Im glad i succeeded! Cant wait to check out the next chapters of yours!
christinatryphena christinatryphena Feb 03, 2011
Thanks so much guys! truly, and @catracha2sweet I was contemplating hell but i just couldnt fit it in, in any way haha
thepenguinqueen thepenguinqueen Feb 02, 2011
Aww it alomst had me crying too. Honestly I always thought you go to hell when you commit suicide. But I'm happy they end up together even after they are dead.
VAaddict VAaddict Feb 02, 2011
I know they died but I can't feel sad about that because they're happy now. Great ending.
VAaddict VAaddict Feb 02, 2011
wow... that was... well, for lack of a better word, heartbreaking. Truly, this was an amazing piece of work. Good job!
Sinead_Rose Sinead_Rose Feb 02, 2011
Wow!! its so sad and intense. You definitely know how to explain things very well. You managed to keep my attention throughout the whole chapter. :)
                              Well done!!!