Lucky You

Lucky You

10.1K Reads 254 Votes 22 Part Story
Juliane By Jullal91 Updated Nov 19, 2012

Emma is starting off her first year at UCLA. She's at a new school with new people, and sadly shes broke. But her aunt lives close and there's a coffee shop where she can work for some cash. But living in LA is not cheap, and she has to find other ways to earn money as well.

Joe walks into her life. He's irresistible, hot, and wanted by everyone. She ends up falling head over heels for him. But what do you do when you love someone you can't have?

Tarrra Tarrra Oct 19, 2012
Hope Blake is actually nice, bacouse Dena sounds like a bitch!
brookieismyname brookieismyname Oct 14, 2012
@Jullal91 
                              
                              I think its' better (: The spacing made the story easier to read by a lot and I found this to be extremely entertaing! I'm going to read more later (:
Jullal91 Jullal91 Oct 14, 2012
@brookieismyname I think it looks better now. go have a look :)
Jullal91 Jullal91 Sep 24, 2012
@SBAamir Thank you so much :) I have to give so credit to my editor, that looks and fixes my grammar and spelling :)
brookieismyname brookieismyname Sep 19, 2012
I liked it but it does need some editing.. I have a friend who is a really good editor if you wanna PM me(: 
                              
                              And try spacing it like a lot of other stories do, where who evers talking get's there own line. It makes the story easier to read.
Jullal91 Jullal91 Sep 15, 2012
@chantalits Not that much in the chapters that are up right now, but there will be a little later. :)