Crystal

Crystal

801 Reads 24 Votes 1 Part Story
Nick from Wattpad By NickUskoski Completed

An everyday trip to work takes a romantic twist when Susan strikes up a conversation with a mysterious man. But is he everything she has hoped for or is there more behind those glasses?

An unusual story Nick, but an interesting one. Reminds me of something bizarre as in a Twilight Zone or Alfred Hitchcock presents episode. To know the future ... way out in the next dimension where whatever decision you make is certainly scary.
TheBestRobin TheBestRobin Jul 29, 2014
The humor in the way they converse, they banter, is priceless. Like a real, witty, conversation. Ha! Great.
OwlxMissxYou OwlxMissxYou Nov 24, 2013
Fantastic!! I wish it was longer though. It could easily be a longer story with more exciting details, but I like where it stops :) It's beautiful
beltzner beltzner Jan 22, 2013
Great short story. As a frequent subway commuter, I really appreciated the details!
HIndia150 HIndia150 Oct 10, 2012
Oh my. Such a beautiful rendition of how fate and future collide through little patterns created by light reflected by the crystals.
                              
                              Splendid.
MyztikalTearz MyztikalTearz Apr 17, 2012
Incredibly thought-provoking short story. It's exactly how I think some days . . . You know, w the what if's. . . In general. Not in a pessimistic nor depressing way :)