An everyday trip to work takes a romantic twist when Susan strikes up a conversation with a mysterious man. But is he everything she has hoped for or is there more behind those glasses?
An unusual story Nick, but an interesting one. Reminds me of something bizarre as in a Twilight Zone or Alfred Hitchcock presents episode. To know the future ... way out in the next dimension where whatever decision you make is certainly scary.
The humor in the way they converse, they banter, is priceless. Like a real, witty, conversation. Ha! Great.
Fantastic!! I wish it was longer though. It could easily be a longer story with more exciting details, but I like where it stops :) It's beautiful
Great short story. As a frequent subway commuter, I really appreciated the details!
Oh my. Such a beautiful rendition of how fate and future collide through little patterns created by light reflected by the crystals.
Incredibly thought-provoking short story. It's exactly how I think some days . . . You know, w the what if's. . . In general. Not in a pessimistic nor depressing way :)