Crystal

Crystal

1 Part Story 799 Reads 23 Votes
Nick from Wattpad By NickUskoski Completed

An everyday trip to work takes a romantic twist when Susan strikes up a conversation with a mysterious man. But is he everything she has hoped for or is there more behind those glasses?

TheBestRobin TheBestRobin Jul 29, 2014 07:23AM
The humor in the way they converse, they banter, is priceless. Like a real, witty, conversation. Ha! Great.
OwlxMissxYou OwlxMissxYou Nov 24, 2013 10:09PM
Fantastic!! I wish it was longer though. It could easily be a longer story with more exciting details, but I like where it stops :) It's beautiful
beltzner beltzner Jan 22, 2013 11:27PM
Great short story. As a frequent subway commuter, I really appreciated the details!
HIndia150 HIndia150 Oct 10, 2012 07:49PM
Oh my. Such a beautiful rendition of how fate and future collide through little patterns created by light reflected by the crystals.
                              
                              Splendid.
MyztikalTearz MyztikalTearz Apr 17, 2012 06:17AM
Incredibly thought-provoking short story. It's exactly how I think some days . . . You know, w the what if's. . . In general. Not in a pessimistic nor depressing way :)
ch4rmed ch4rmed Mar 21, 2012 09:30PM
Interesting start so far, I'm curious to see what Mark plans on doing. Nice dialogue between Susan and Mark. The way mark spoke, he sounded so old haha. Almost like an old soul, like someone who has seen and lived it all. Nice :)