Crystal

Crystal

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Nick from Wattpad By nick Completed

An everyday trip to work takes a romantic twist when Susan strikes up a conversation with a mysterious man. But is he everything she has hoped for or is there more behind those glasses?

dani dani Jul 03
I like that too. That his smile is nice because of the intention.
dani dani Jul 03
She's dressed too formally to be working at a magazine company. The full suit look doesn't really happen in publishing unless she's in fashion, in which case she would not be wearing marroon. Don't you love nitpicking commenters?
CoffeeCommunity CoffeeCommunity Aug 29, 2016
An unusual story Nick, but an interesting one. Reminds me of something bizarre as in a Twilight Zone or Alfred Hitchcock presents episode. To know the future ... way out in the next dimension where whatever decision you make is certainly scary.
TheBestRobin TheBestRobin Jul 29, 2014
The humor in the way they converse, they banter, is priceless. Like a real, witty, conversation. Ha! Great.
OwlxMissxYou OwlxMissxYou Nov 24, 2013
Fantastic!! I wish it was longer though. It could easily be a longer story with more exciting details, but I like where it stops :) It's beautiful
beltzner beltzner Jan 22, 2013
Great short story. As a frequent subway commuter, I really appreciated the details!