Polly Winters has always been different. But lately she's been feeling strange, and all of these weird things keep happening. Polly feels she is going crazy, but is that the real reason? Was she really destined for an ordinary life?
Too short but it looks promising, moving on to the next chapter and voted ofcourse!!!!
@shaebo2012 i know its short, but thanks anyway!!! i'm working on the first chapter, which will be longer, though.
@tianajade yeah, i think i need to add on some more. thanks, though!
I think it's a good beginning, even though it's pretty short.
Some of the descriptions are good, and it leaves the reader wanting to read on (: Good work!
Good prologue, the description is very nice. Gives the reader a clear understanding.
And btw, enter this in the watty awards, just change the category teen fiction to watty awards 2011, good luck!