Up in the Clouds (ON HOLD)

Up in the Clouds (ON HOLD)

714 Reads 36 Votes 4 Part Story
Sophie By Zsofia_Az_Almodo Updated Feb 10, 2011

Polly Winters has always been different. But lately she's been feeling strange, and all of these weird things keep happening. Polly feels she is going crazy, but is that the real reason? Was she really destined for an ordinary life?

Phamous Phamous Feb 08, 2011
Too short but it looks promising, moving on to the next chapter and voted ofcourse!!!!
Zsofia_Az_Almodo Zsofia_Az_Almodo Feb 08, 2011
@shaebo2012  i know its short, but thanks anyway!!! i'm working on the first chapter, which will be longer, though.
Zsofia_Az_Almodo Zsofia_Az_Almodo Feb 04, 2011
@tianajade yeah, i think i need to add on some more. thanks, though! 
tianajade tianajade Feb 04, 2011
I think it's a good beginning, even though it's pretty short. 
                              Some of the descriptions are good, and it leaves the reader wanting to read on (: Good work!
vantablack vantablack Feb 04, 2011
Good prologue, the description is very nice. Gives the reader a clear understanding.
dustclears dustclears Feb 04, 2011
And btw, enter this in the watty awards, just change the category teen fiction to watty awards 2011, good luck!