Alpha Alpha

Alpha Alpha

38 Part Story 108K Reads 1.5K Votes
epalpebrate By epalpebrate Completed

Tyra, a young aspiring Lawyer has a hidden past and wants to have her mate by her side, and move on. Hunter rejects her. Then, realising the mistake he's made, tries to put it right as she leads him on a rollar coaster, dragging the whole pack along for the ride.

chector53 chector53 Sep 16, 2014 10:28PM
I was good and different, you jumped right in with the reason for her upset and rejection of one's mate is painful.  Wolves who reject their mates usually feel the pain as well.  so good he felt bad and he has a slut puppy (human) at his side which his family dislike. wow boy he is smart.
XxGoldfishxX XxGoldfishxX May 21, 2012 04:18PM
This is really good! :) I wonder who they were talking about- who has her number?
SafeHaven SafeHaven May 02, 2012 09:45PM
I love it so far and I love the cover. Wolves are my favorite :)
This story has potential and i'll have to read the rest later, but the grammar mistakes kinda kill the plot for me. Not hating, just saying. Aside from that, it looks good; the multiple POV's will give the reader's imagination a few pictures of the same scene to choose from.
epalpebrate epalpebrate Apr 30, 2012 06:28AM
@Lovely143. Aww thanks! Yehh I realised, epilogue instead of prologue :L haha
Lovely143 Lovely143 Apr 30, 2012 06:14AM
I really like this story a little tiny mistake but I love it you deserve more comments(:  poor Tyra!