"they told us that we needed therapy, as if medication and tainted words could fix broken toys."
I know what it's like to be the one giving therapy to others,but in the end,I am the one who needs therapy. I guess this goes to show that not all that are broken can truly be fixed. Those few lines conveyed that really well. Good job.
No offense to what you just wrote but medication does help if you have a mental illness it's a chemical imbalance which the pills adjust. Of course, it doesn't always work completely but it can stabilize someone who has a mental disorder
PERFECT HOOK! Love your comparison with "broken toys" and the characters! <3
I'm assuming by 'broken toys' means a person with a mental disorder / illness and medication can actually help with that
What really intrigued me was that its a 62 chapter long, short story. lol.
The idea is really unique! Gotta read this, woo!
i think i'm kinda late but omg i REALLY LOVE YOUR WORKS!!! LIKE ASDDFGHKLHDJY I READ YOUR WORKS LIKE ZERO AND SHADES OF BLUE (*CURSE IN EVERY LANGUAGE BC FEELS*) AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THIS BOOK TO FINISH