In love with an high king. *Finished*

In love with an high king. *Finished*

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slytherin_queen12 By slytherin_queen12 Completed

Becky Green was one of the prettiest and clever girl there was in Peter Pevensie eyes. He would try to impress her, make her happy but she always didn't listen. Until one day she ends up in Narnia and finds out about Peter secret. Things might start to change.

NH_SMdancr13 NH_SMdancr13 May 03, 2017
I'm a little confused on the person or pov. You keep changing from 1st person to 3rd person
fashionqueen102 fashionqueen102 Apr 14, 2017
"He bumped me." 
                              "So you hit him?"
                              "No, after he bumped me he tried to make me apologize that's when I hit him."
Charlietheuniverse Charlietheuniverse Sep 19, 2016
You are continuously changing from third and thirst point of view it is rather annoying