The Mer Prince (Published, Sample)

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Lindsey Owens By LindseyOwens Completed
Zachariah is handsome and different. He pays attention to Gabriella when no other guys do. He stands up for her when her 'friends' decide to leave her. But he has a secret. He also has a guard, Preston. Preston is just as strong and handsome as Zach but he's not the friendliest. It takes him time to warm up to people. What is the two guys hiding and why does he have such a fascination with the shy and quiet Gabriella.
She has Published the book that's why, The contract she should of  signed for it to be published would've said to not give anything away. This is the reason why the chapters are gone.
What's happening with this story? The chapters keep appearing, dissapearing, changing... Can you tell us what's going on?
Totally confused right now. What happened to the rest of the chapters?
I agree that this chapter should've been a prologue. It's good but I really liked the original and the way the old story was already going.
I just finished reading this 
                                    Just wondering is there another part of this
                                    Coz looks like its unfinished 
                                    Hopefully there is another 
                                    Coz i love reading it got addicted to it
couldnt you have put this as a prolouge instead of a new first chapter? its good but i like the old story too