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Words Unspoken

Words Unspoken

3K Reads 29 Votes 21 Part Story
Mae By Maegan-Danielle Updated Jun 08, 2011

"Life sure does change...after you wake up dead."
Fifteen year old Brianna Westley never dreamed of how hard it must be to accept a loved one's death.  She lived in an Orphanage home for almost all of her life, and didn't like to stay in one place too long, for fear of remembering.  But, that was before she met Ryan.  She couldn't seem to shake him off...he just kept coming back.  How hard was it to get this boy to leave her alone?  She was in danger of falling for him.  How could she lose someone else?  But...then, of course, she finds out a harsh reality.  Waking up alone was one thing, but to wake up dead was another.  As hard as was to accept her beloved parents' car accident, this was unbearable.  How did this happen?  It couldn't be real.  Brianna gained the solitude she had wanted, but faced the haunting, undeniable fact that she was alone.  Dead.  And she knew who killed her...

ACRL37 ACRL37 Jun 02, 2011
This is a really good start! One or two misspellings (such as 'scenario' where you left out the c) but I think the story sounds interesting and has a lot of potential. Voted! =) 
lozzyloo22 lozzyloo22 Jun 02, 2011
might add this to my library when i have read the stuff in it! really good