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Queen of the Wolves

Queen of the Wolves

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Briana By Breezy_Love21 Updated Feb 07, 2011

Stacy morrigan, a 13 year old girl doesn't know who she is or what she is supposed to do in life. Her destiny is to become the Queen of all wolves and is to take her thrown in the land of Eloistra. It will be a long voyage. The evil demon wolf Lomecte is in her way. She has to find her calling herself, something the pack can't give to her.

Breezy_Love21 Breezy_Love21 Aug 22, 2011
@silly-sophie sorry im SO late thing got difficult (personal problems) but im back! I'm gonna finish and you weren't harsh thnks for tha tip i'll use it .
silly-sophie silly-sophie Feb 27, 2011
Its got great potential, but I found a few little mistakes in there. No biggie! I make them all the time! like capitals for 'I', and only use 'and' in a sentence once, otherwise it seems too continuous. 
                              I hope this helps, sorry if I was harsh! I really like it though!