Eden: A Short Story

Eden: A Short Story

330 Reads 28 Votes 1 Part Story
Emily Faith By TheDivineMissM Completed

Venture lives in the society of Eden, a dome protected civilization of thirteen thousand, possibly the last inhabitants of the world.
When he meets a girl called Eden, he gets more than he bargained for, and finds looks can be very deceiving.

  • biotechnology
  • bubble
  • eden
  • fiction
  • science
  • venture
darkangelrawr darkangelrawr May 03, 2013
I usually hate Science fiction and I mean HATE, but this was really really good I enjoyed it, I can't wait to read some of your other works!
TheDivineMissM TheDivineMissM Oct 28, 2012
@ShellyK99 Haha will do! I won't be posting my current one on here, because I'm actually hoping to get it published. Butttt considering the chances of that actually happening, it'll probably be up here some time next year xD
ShellyK99 ShellyK99 Oct 24, 2012
@TheDivineMissN Keep thinking on it, because it'd be a good read. And hopefully, if you still feel interested in writing in it, I'd be interested in reading it. :P
                              
                              And for your other books, will be waiting patiently for it :D !
Moncrieff Moncrieff Jul 08, 2012
Great story! It's pretty long for a short story, but that's no bad thing.
                               I thought it was pretty obvious that she was a mutant/ virus creature from the bit with the water, but the twist at the end makes up for it.
                              Well written, sparkling and very easy to read.
                              
                              Yours,
                              Algernon.
TheDivineMissM TheDivineMissM May 10, 2012
@HuggingFeet
                              
                              I am partial to a little shocking ending or two xD
                              
                              I'm so happy to hear you say that, as my voice as a writer is something I've been struggling with over the last few years, but I feel like I've finally found it =)
                              
                              Thank you again for your lovely comments! =)
JakeVanderArk JakeVanderArk May 03, 2012
@TheDivineMissM You have a fantastic, original voice, great metaphors and similes, a nice concept, and an awesome last line. Overall, this is one of the best stories I've read on wattpad. Definitely voted!