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I'm Not a Fighter, I'm a Victim

I'm Not a Fighter, I'm a Victim

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sasukechar2 By sasukechar2 Updated Mar 14, 2011

Riley is an orphan girl that wants to fit in. But she can't with the constant bullying that happens to her. The one thing she wants to know—more than her parents mysterious death—is why. Why do those children target her? What did she do to deserve this? 
Luca, a boy who has always thought life was awesome witnesses something terrible. Riley's constant beatings; he sees the dark side of the world, and tries to help her. But Riley doesn't want it, and somewhere deep down, he feels she needs it.

tianajade tianajade Mar 01, 2011
A good start. Your writing style needs a little more work, but it's good beginning at the moment. Lots of teens will be able to relate to this and empathise with the character, which is good. Nice work, and keep writing! (: