girl who scared.

girl who scared.

118 Reads 3 Votes 1 Part Story
jasper By evaellinor Completed

girl scares night and feels like someone watches her........
what can happen with one night................

xxlovelyluvxx xxlovelyluvxx Feb 02, 2011
heEy !! i think it is nice , but honestly you need to check it again like but some commas and full stops tiny errors i think you will do great without them ,
                              if you found any difficulties you can join a club on wattpad to improve your skills 
                              
                              great work though =)