Meet Melina a girl who is reckless, devastatingly beautiful, and a super genius. The only problem is she doesn't let people in...ever. She's lost everyone she ever loved so who can blame her?
@44always44 btw i was thinking of the 7:11 song not bad day @_@
7:11 lol but im also made of walls only a few people know a lot bout me
one girl I'm not to sure of she's my friend or not but I know she trusts me has walls and I want her to let me in but she says it will get bad and she'll have a break down if I do bring them down.
I would be happy to live in NYC. I see why she don't wanna tho.
I noted the biggest mistakes in the chapter, but there are more. Also, you could use some lessons in punctuation
Greetings from TheGrammarPatrol
it was 7:11*
otherwise this part of the sentence refers back to "I", which makes it "I was 7:11 November 16th"