Fighting Thy Master

Fighting Thy Master

6 Part Story 10.6K Reads 204 Votes
JCordell By Flicka0fth3N1ght Updated Jan 16, 2014 02:40AM

The world is unfar, unforgiving, and judgmental. In this world vampires and werewolves have a packet. Humans are for food, in less they are the bond pairs of either a vampire or a werewolf. Any unneeded vampires or werewolves, of covens and packs alike, are giving to the slave trade. Were the royals have werewolves and humans even there own kind that work for them while the werewolve kingdom is the same.(OK I know the summery SuCkX and im sorry I stink at summerys :) )

Thank you all! I'm working on the next chapter but I'm a sophomore and have a lot of stuff going on but I'll get the next chapter up soon I hope!
I'm on the first page and i cant stop reading, i wont stop reading. This is awesome i luv vamps and wolfs and this book has em both and i like having slaves and there struggles GREAT!
karshnray karshnray Jul 01, 2012 11:01PM
i think its good like awesome to me and im not just saying that cause your a friend
@Punkfairymarni 
                                    
                                    I will be spacing out everything soon I promise :)
EyeOfTheHippie EyeOfTheHippie Jul 01, 2012 10:55PM
That was good. Just remember to put spaces. Can't wait for the next upload :)
EyeOfTheHippie EyeOfTheHippie Jul 01, 2012 10:52PM
Okay here's my constructive critisim, you have got to space everything out. Cause then it won't make readers feel uncomfortable or confused. BUT what I've read so far is good :)