Diving to Deep

Diving to Deep

910 Reads 8 Votes 4 Part Story
oxBeckzzA95xo By oxBeckzzA95xo Updated Aug 18, 2011

Before... everything about Kiera Preston was stunning, her beauty, her personality, her popularity. However she has always had one Irrational fear, water.  Life leads her back to her home town and her closest friend- Jess- but also to a stunning blue eyed guy who just so happens to be all she needs to conquer her fear but as things start to heat up and Kiera finds herself falling for him it becomes apparent that hiding her behind her hair wont get her anywhere but then again isn't it against the law to be inl love with your pe teacher?

Winterfalls Winterfalls Sep 09, 2011
I think thats really good a couple of spelling mistakes but that doesnt matter... its a really interesting style.
JustKaylay JustKaylay Feb 16, 2011
It's really amazing, girl! Your descriptions are really vivid and intense.
JustKaylay JustKaylay Feb 16, 2011
I read it(; And it's really good so far! So, I'm gonna go read the next chapter(:
oxBeckzzA95xo oxBeckzzA95xo Feb 03, 2011
Thanks and erm can u tell me the mistakes you know Im awful at spotting them =)xoxoxo