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How To Kill A Snapping Turtle

How To Kill A Snapping Turtle

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Raiddy By raiddyrox Completed

A short story I wrote based off of the life of my dad and his best friend Bruce. PLZ comment, and give feed-back! I really want to become a better writer, to please give constructive criticism

raiddyrox raiddyrox Feb 02, 2011
@purplegirl14  Thx, yeah I know i'm not to good, with the whole grammar bit
purplegirl14 purplegirl14 Feb 01, 2011
Hey. This is a good start. Some parts are funny. You could improve by working on your grammer and punctuation. Also, more details would be good. Love the last sentence, but it's kind of a run on. But you're doing fine. Keep it up.