A short story I wrote based off of the life of my dad and his best friend Bruce. PLZ comment, and give feed-back! I really want to become a better writer, to please give constructive criticism
@purplegirl14 Thx, yeah I know i'm not to good, with the whole grammar bit
Hey. This is a good start. Some parts are funny. You could improve by working on your grammer and punctuation. Also, more details would be good. Love the last sentence, but it's kind of a run on. But you're doing fine. Keep it up.