Pure Heart (watty awards 2012 finalist!)

Pure Heart (watty awards 2012 finalist!)

29.7K Reads 752 Votes 13 Part Story
L.H By Lhafez98 Completed

........"There! Now let me lo-" he stopped.  And when I turned to look at him he stared at me with eyes as wide as watermelons.  He saw it I thought.  He saw it. I felt my eyes water.  Why did I take of the jacket! Stupid! Stupid! Stupid! How could I forget! How!?

"I- I- I can explai-" I started but he grabbed my arm and we were flying out of the restaurant before I could even take a breath.

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Casey was a normal 16-year-old girl with many passions, but once a mysterious boy at school and a strange man start paying extra attention to her, she doesn't feel as safe as she once was. When she starts seeing haunting visions of death whenever she looks into either man's eyes, she's sure that this isn't going to end well.  Before Casey can figure out why this is all happening, she has to cope with losing everything she loves most.

EmileighJohnston EmileighJohnston Sep 09, 2012
I will admit this isnt my type of story I usually read and the story started off a bit slow but other books that start off slow tned to end up fantastic and I feel the story progressing so I am going to continue, I am very curious as to what is going to play out
TheTommoSeries TheTommoSeries Sep 07, 2012
Okay this is amazing, the editing has only helped it! I really like the choice of words you've included, the story flowed really well and It kept my interest which is a bonus!
victoria_nicolette victoria_nicolette Sep 07, 2012
It's writtten very well and it's something readers can relate to (:
RAiiNcloud RAiiNcloud Aug 27, 2012
I like her interaction wiht the cat :) It's very life like. I have that arguement everyday about spoiling the cat! ahah
                              And also her walk to school was a good one. 
                              You've given this story a real like.. real life take and it's refreshing. It seems more relatable than most
Chocolov3r Chocolov3r Aug 24, 2012
Wow, 3 edits!! Worth it I say, cause I can't find any mistakes! :D Good luck in Watty Awards! I think you could win ^^
- - Aug 15, 2012
I loved this chapter, specially the description of the vision she has. I hope you don't mind me saying this but the beginning was a bit boring. Otherwise, your writing is very impressive.
                              Voted! :)