The smile

The smile

1.5K Reads 30 Votes 7 Part Story
Iona By jaz9542 Updated Apr 15, 2011

Leah is the only female were ever in her packs history and shes the only one that can read minds and communicate to witches threw thought, her life is perfect till a vamp she doesn't by nature want to destroy. Leah falls for the vampire but does he feel the same who knows all we know is that if her pack find out he's the vampire they can't find there will be trouble. I hope yous all enjoy this story :) 
Leahs character is Sasha Pieterse
Evans character is Drew Van Acker
Meredith's character is Amber Stevens 
Mynerva's character is Tina Knowles
Matt's character is Kevin Zegers
Blair's character is Ryan Kennedy

jaz9542 jaz9542 Feb 10, 2011
@BrodiexxYey glad you think it's good hahaha my grammar is always awful I'll try and edit it on my computer before I upload infuture :) thanks xxxxxx
Brodiexx Brodiexx Feb 09, 2011
Cool! Really intense, I like where the plot is going : D its a little confusing at some points like the detention thingy, but otherwise its a really good story line!xx
Brodiexx Brodiexx Feb 09, 2011
It'spretty cool! Kind of captivating... I wonder who the sexy vamp is? I'm glad we get to know more about him :P grammer wasn't the best, but the story line is awesome so thats kl xx :)
jaz9542 jaz9542 Feb 01, 2011
Hey thanks so much I really appricate you commenting I'm not good at English so that will explain my awful punctuation hahaaa :) 
                              Iona
AnonymousInc AnonymousInc Feb 01, 2011
So far, so good! Although, if you don't mind me saying, some commas would be nice. Right now it's a little difficult to read. Keep up the good work!