I'm Pregnant! with my teacher/vampire baby

I'm Pregnant! with my teacher/vampire baby

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fatal22 By fatal22 Updated Nov 22, 2014

*I AM TERRIBLE AT WRITING THESE... BUT HERE WE GO* -Besides being verbally and physically abuse by her family, Ebony Larson is just your Normal teenager.. she does what she is told she never gets into trouble everybody loves her..But all that changed when her best friends talked her into going to a club.And there she met Blake Mcgamler, Blake is your typically guy/player, expect he is a vampire not just any vampire but a prince who has been sent to America for his bad behavior, but what happens when ebony and Blake hook up and Ebony wide up pregnant? will Blake give up his player ways? or will he remain the same? will Ebony revels to Blake she pregnant? or will he find out on his own? follow Ebony and Blake on there quest to finding happiness or something close...

JinxZoldyck JinxZoldyck Jul 23
Who else thinks that the girl in the book cover looks like Bella from Twilight
Donna313 Donna313 Aug 20
@fatal22 how come you don't use quotation marks it would be easier to read
Inwill leave a comment on each chapter on how well you did all i ask in return isbyou read my 2 books (thats in progress) and leave comments
ekemem ekemem Nov 24, 2015
Need to work on the Grammar.... But I love it thou..... Just edit it and make correction on the grammar
zoemariemorgan zoemariemorgan Nov 24, 2015
your imagery is spot on. however, i  think you need to make you transitions clear. I thought she was fond of girls until your excellent details showed that it was the vampire looking at the main character.  the beginning was not very fitting for the style you chose. but it works
ishak191 ishak191 Oct 19, 2015
you write good but i think you have any errors by the way i love your story