Shattered but not Broken (COMPLETED) EDITING SLOWLEY

Shattered but not Broken (COMPLETED) EDITING SLOWLEY

229K Reads 4.9K Votes 38 Part Story
Rachel Rodriguez Obregon By RachelRodriguezObreg Completed

Carra couldent get over everything her ex had made her go threw he had shattered her and shown her that love can make some people possive and jelouos. When her parents make the choice to move to get her away from him shes left with the fear of starting a new school and meeting new people. Her first day in the new town she meets lucas and he makes her feel things shes never felt before .
Lucas cant belive hes finally found his mate the only problem is that she keeps running away from him. Now hes left with the task of trying to get his mate to trust him and telling her hes a werewolf.

rkuhel78 rkuhel78 Feb 14
I think you mixed up Eric and Adam up while explaining when the cops showed up and the jail part.
peaches0707 peaches0707 May 10
There is no content in chapter one. It says chapter one, then blank till the icons at the bottom.
crazyreader111 crazyreader111 May 29, 2013
the way you have them talk it really confusing. maybe make a new paragraph each time?
PikachuLover PikachuLover May 28, 2013
I like the story but you need to fix the punctuations and spelling
Bubble12 Bubble12 Feb 16, 2013
To hard to follow and with all the grammar issues and could you please leanr how to spell YOU!!
katpin katpin Sep 30, 2012
Grammar issues and small stuff like that are everywhere you should really try to spell out the complete word instead of 'u' etc. but really great once you get past that it's a rally great story can't wait to read more