Why am I still here?

Why am I still here?

6.7K Reads 168 Votes 9 Part Story
Renee Duport By whoopee_dolphin Updated Jun 11, 2011

Do you like where you are now?

Have you ever thought of or tried suicide?

You should know that I’ve tried it. And I’ve succeeded.

What do you think of me now?

Alas, relief from all my problems is yet to come.

Now as a ghost, I’m still stuck here on Earth, under the care of my ex-boyfriend of all people until he deems me fit to ‘move on’.

If he ever does.

Till then, I’m stuck here-the very place I intended to escape.

Please, for the sake of my sanity, help me to die again-for good this time.

ParaWhore3 ParaWhore3 May 24, 2012
OH GAWD! This was just fantastic. Ugh...Reed and I have much in common as well>.>
ImJustOneGirl ImJustOneGirl Apr 27, 2011
omg this is serious stuff! its a realy good prologue and the last sentance realy makes a reader want to continue on to the next chapter so well done!! xxx <3 voted
Laaniiie Laaniiie Apr 26, 2011
Great ending! 
                              I feel sooo sorry for Reed though D:
                              Voted :D
RimUranium RimUranium Apr 26, 2011
Oh this really wrenched my heart . . . such a sad beginning! Poor Reed . . . and suicide? Wow her parents must be such nightmares for her to resort to death . . . but she didn't die properly did she? :) Great plot!!!! Quite original Voted <3
whoopee_dolphin whoopee_dolphin Apr 24, 2011
@IndiSkye thanks for your encouragement and I'll be sure to check out the story when I have the time. Please c ontinue to read & support!
IndiSkye IndiSkye Apr 20, 2011
For  first story, this is definitely good.  I'm currently reading "A Child Called It" and you story reminded me an awful lot of that- not in a copied kind of way, but I found that it had the same sort of feeling and tempo, which I really liked.  It definitely made me wa to read on.  Keep it up!