Remember the Burning Dream?

Remember the Burning Dream?

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K~Lovely By WeirdGirl_51 Updated Nov 29, 2018

plural noun: dreams
a series of thoughts, images, and sensations occurring in a person's mind during sleep.

Dreams are supposed to be things you've experienced bits and pieces from what you've seen during the day,you're thoughts, your hopes, your memories. These dreams they aren't always mine. They scare me. I want it to stop but not really. Then when I think about it I want to help although I know I can't. I wish I can control them do something but How can I? I can't escape what's in my head. I wish I could.........I think

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Ace_of_Grace Ace_of_Grace Dec 05, 2018
If you made this section into a new chapter you should then add a little more to this section.  Overall I like the idea of PTSD, abuse, and coping. Nice 👌
Ace_of_Grace Ace_of_Grace Dec 05, 2018
This right here could be a really good place to end the chapter for this one.
Ace_of_Grace Ace_of_Grace Dec 05, 2018
Okay, it’s starting to make more sense, but your first few paragraphs are very confusing.  I think if you went back through and re/read them thinking about how to reword parts of them, it would be very beneficial.