Distance Traveled

5 Part Story 1K Reads 51 Votes
SleepyZombie33 By SleepyZombie33 Updated 3 years ago
Lorelei, "Lori", is best friends with Samantha, who has a habit of picking up really random and old objects. Lori never thought that a pocket watch would cause so much problems. After Lori successfully opens the watch, the two of them pass out. Soon, they find themselves thrown across the earth and going back into time. The two of them need to find a way back home, but none of them know how to work the watch. How long will they be stuck there? Who will they meet? And, more importantly, how do they get out without changing the present? 
    
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    Writers Note: I thought I would put this here so it doesn't disrupt the flow of the story. Anyway, I know this is probably a pretty cliche story idea, but I am trying to make it a little more original. I've always enjoyed time travelling stories and I thought I would take a shot at writing one. I'm not a historian or a history buff, but I will be trying to keep things as accurate to the time(s) that they end up visiting. There will be a a few historical figures mentioned or interacted with in this story as well. So, please, if you find something to be incorrect, grammar or historic fact wise, please let me know. I will be editing this story, so I'm always open for people to correct me. 
    
    Anyway, if you like this story, enjoy! :)
ooh, this is really interesting! i haven't seen anything like this on wattpad before and i have to say that i really enjoyed it. i like how you waited a while, explaining the complications in Lori's life before getting to the watch part. them both passing out was a good way to cut it off as well. there were a few errors that i spotted, so i think you might want to do a bit of proof reading. one i noticed was in the third paragraph where you put "aspiration" i think you meant "exasperation"? i might be wrong but the word you used didn't seem to fit right... anyway, on the whole a really good job! *voted*
                                    
                                    RATING: 8.5 / 10
ooh, this is really interesting! i haven't seen anything like this on wattpad before and i have to say that i really enjoyed it. i like how you waited a while, explaining the complications in Lori's life before getting to the watch part. them both passing out was a good way to cut it off as well. there were a few errors that i spotted, so i think you might want to do a bit of proof reading. one i noticed was in the third paragraph where you put "aspiration" i think you meant "exasperation"? i might be wrong but the word you used didn't seem to fit right... anyway, on the whole a really good job! *voted*
                                    
                                    RATING: 8.5 / 10
ooh, this is really interesting! i haven't seen anything like this on wattpad before and i have to say that i really enjoyed it. i like how you waited a while, explaining the complications in Lori's life before getting to the watch part. them both passing out was a good way to cut it off as well. there were a few errors that i spotted, so i think you might want to do a bit of proof reading. one i noticed was in the third paragraph where you put "aspiration" i think you meant "exasperation"? i might be wrong but the word you used didn't seem to fit right... anyway, on the whole a really good job! *voted*
                                    
                                    RATING: 8.5 / 10
ooh, this is really interesting! i haven't seen anything like this on wattpad before and i have to say that i really enjoyed it. i like how you waited a while, explaining the complications in Lori's life before getting to the watch part. them both passing out was a good way to cut it off as well. there were a few errors that i spotted, so i think you might want to do a bit of proof reading. one i noticed was in the third paragraph where you put "aspiration" i think you meant "exasperation"? i might be wrong but the word you used didn't seem to fit right... anyway, on the whole a really good job! *voted*
                                    
                                    RATING: 8.5 / 10
ooh, this is really interesting! i haven't seen anything like this on wattpad before and i have to say that i really enjoyed it. i like how you waited a while, explaining the complications in Lori's life before getting to the watch part. them both passing out was a good way to cut it off as well. there were a few errors that i spotted, so i think you might want to do a bit of proof reading. one i noticed was in the third paragraph where you put "aspiration" i think you meant "exasperation"? i might be wrong but the word you used didn't seem to fit right... anyway, on the whole a really good job! *voted*
                                    
                                    RATING: 8.5 / 10
ooh, this is really interesting! i haven't seen anything like this on wattpad before and i have to say that i really enjoyed it. i like how you waited a while, explaining the complications in Lori's life before getting to the watch part. them both passing out was a good way to cut it off as well. there were a few errors that i spotted, so i think you might want to do a bit of proof reading. one i noticed was in the third paragraph where you put "aspiration" i think you meant "exasperation"? i might be wrong but the word you used didn't seem to fit right... anyway, on the whole a really good job! *voted*
                                    
                                    RATING: 8.5 / 10