true love isnt always what it seems

true love isnt always what it seems

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Cici Bear By Cici47 Updated Mar 15, 2011

when alice has a new guy in school it was literally love at first sight. charlie was the cutest and falling for alice. her dreams came true and charlie was her new boyfriend! they had a great relationship until one day something really bad happened!  READ READ READ!!!!!!!!!! BEST BOOK EVER!!!!!!!!!!

Cici47 Cici47 May 23, 2011
I know it's my first story but my next one is gonna be better Im working on it right now sooooo....yep thx for the feedback
JassyJasXO JassyJasXO May 21, 2011
It is a good story but you need to work on your punctuation. I think it is a bit rushed how they get together so quick but whatever. 
Cici47 Cici47 Mar 17, 2011
Thx Chanel that still means alot to me and I will need help sometimes and I think I'm gonna start using word it sounds easier. I kno this isn't my best I'm starting a different story now but let me kno if I should keep going with this story or not
Nelroy_4321 Nelroy_4321 Mar 17, 2011
... I'll be honest wit u... What I thought... Meh. It was alright. Not ur best I've seen ;) but I can help if u want me 2 XD lemme kno