My powers

My powers

56.9K Reads 2.5K Votes 12 Part Story
Kimberly By Kimberlyn25 Updated Dec 22, 2017

Ok, you go to this boarding school but it ain't any ordinary boarding school it has fairies, witches, vampires, werewolves and this extremely rare  supe called a Dewilia which has every single power. Paige Nills is a Dewilia will she fit in or stick out ding out in this adventure through school as a supernatural freak.

  • allpowerful
  • boy
  • dewilia
  • fantasy
  • girl
  • powers
  • supernatural
Minecraft_lover101 Minecraft_lover101 Oct 28, 2017
No offense but would you please not do that. I think the author knows this but types fast so it comes out like that.
                              Great grammar observations though!
PugLover214 PugLover214 May 29, 2017
Period after standing. 'the' changes to 'The'. Put an 'and' after 'is'.
PugLover214 PugLover214 May 29, 2017
Period after 'office'. Period after 'Delwilias'. Period after 'supernatural'. 'most' becomes 'Most'. Maybe get rid of 'race' and keep the 'kind'. Period after 'universe'. 'you' becomes 'You'. Comma before 'my' and after 'dear'.
PugLover214 PugLover214 May 29, 2017
Maybe: 'What kind of question is that? I reply, "I think I'm human". '
PugLover214 PugLover214 May 29, 2017
Period after say. Put an 'and' after 'area'. 'she' becomes 'She'.
PugLover214 PugLover214 May 29, 2017
Comma after new. Put an 'and' after the second new. Period after 'Paige'. 'nice' becomes 'Nice'.