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My powers

My powers

44.3K Reads 1.9K Votes 11 Part Story
kimberly By Kimberlyn25 Updated Jun 10, 2015

Ok, you go to this boarding school but it ain't any ordinary boarding school it has fairies, witches, vampires, werewolves and this extremely rare  supe called a Dewilia which has every single power. Paige Nills is a Dewilia will she fit in or stick out ding out in this adventure through school as a supernatural freak.

PugLover214 PugLover214 May 29
Period after standing. 'the' changes to 'The'. Put an 'and' after 'is'.
PugLover214 PugLover214 May 29
Period after 'office'. Period after 'Delwilias'. Period after 'supernatural'. 'most' becomes 'Most'. Maybe get rid of 'race' and keep the 'kind'. Period after 'universe'. 'you' becomes 'You'. Comma before 'my' and after 'dear'.
PugLover214 PugLover214 May 29
Maybe: 'What kind of question is that? I reply, "I think I'm human". '
PugLover214 PugLover214 May 29
Period after say. Put an 'and' after 'area'. 'she' becomes 'She'.
PugLover214 PugLover214 May 29
Comma after new. Put an 'and' after the second new. Period after 'Paige'. 'nice' becomes 'Nice'.
PugLover214 PugLover214 May 29
Period after 'says'. 'then' becomes 'Then'. Comma after 'Then'. Period after 'Dewilia'. 'he' becomes 'He'. Period after 'surprise'. 'hello' becomes 'Hello'. 'mr.' becomes 'Mr.'. Period after 'Herman'. 'hey' becomes 'Hey'. Put an 'and' after the first 'it'.