a mermaids mate

a mermaids mate

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lollypop dragon By lollypopdragon Updated Jan 05

Merida is a mermaid living among humans. When she was five she found her mate. But the thing is, she couldn't tell him yet. Cause which six year old would believe her. So she didn't tell him and just wanted to be her friend. But here mate didn't want that and started to bully her. So instead of constantly being hurt she watches him from the sideline. After many years of being bullied and being in the shadows she doesn't want a mate anymore. But what happens when her mate finally start looking at her?

please give it a change

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booklover005 booklover005 Aug 04, 2015
They love to 'play pranks'. (I can try to point out some spelling issues if you want me to)
ImSlightlyObsessed ImSlightlyObsessed Apr 06, 2015
This story is really good. You were saying English isn't your main language but the spelling and grammar is really well written.
CHARLENEEfoe CHARLENEEfoe Feb 14, 2015
I keep looking at my tree and talking to it even if I know they don't exist....right
jewler320s jewler320s Nov 17, 2014
very intrigued i like the characters and the type of story that you've written it was very good. I think that there needs to be some more discription of charaters looks and personality not just on relations between them. i still loved it and was very intrigued well done.:-D
Miksmax Miksmax Jul 10, 2014
You might want to say after instead of before. It doesn't make since because the mother gives birth....... So unless they hatch from eggs you might want to clarify that.