Blondes, Tans, and a beat up VW

Blondes, Tans, and a beat up VW

1.9K Reads 69 Votes 6 Part Story
Hannah By hhowe1 Updated Jul 18, 2011

Natalie Jones is just a regular. Well, she was. She had friends and used to live in a normal community. Then... her Dad had to move to California due to work and she has to adjust to the new kids. Blondes that are tanned and player dudes. What a life!

vantablack vantablack Jul 02, 2011
Pretty much the same advice I gave earlier. Pace yourself...but the dialogue between Natalie and Jake is pretty good.
- - May 23, 2011
Really good too! Again,. I cannnot  vote but I did like it! :)
- - May 23, 2011
Its good, I like it. Yeah its a little rushed but only because its the first chapter so we need to get to know the characters more. But other than that its awesome :) Wish I could vote, but Wattpad is having issues...again. I 'liked' it though! Will keep reading :)
Reekles Reekles May 03, 2011
haha this was good! Just again about the paragraphing... And I loved it up to the kiss - that seemed a little soon. But it was written very well and I really enjoyed it! :D xx
MrsRobsessed MrsRobsessed Mar 15, 2011
"Oh Lawd"
                              xD
                              Typical you, you crazy blonde in disguise!! SO FLIPPING FUDGE-KNOCKER FUNNY! Hilarious... like.... so..... funny....
                              So, um yeah,(like the former commenter)-
                              TEAM JAKE FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!..... [Foreva on da dancefloor.... Muahhaaaa. Only you understand that. Tee hee. xD]
inkyluv98 inkyluv98 Feb 25, 2011
couldn't stop LOL when i read this chapter... completely hilarious :D
                              TEAM JAKE FOREVER!!!!!