The fallen

The fallen

3.1K Reads 84 Votes 7 Part Story
dannyxd By dannyxd Updated May 02, 2011

James died. then a demon named Azael brought him back to life so he can visit the human world to absorb dark energy. James has to help him  to get Azael out of his head and ends up battling demons and monsters.

EvlTwstdDrtyMinds EvlTwstdDrtyMinds Mar 17, 2011
Im sooo sorry it took so long to read your story. :( Its really good!! it has a great beginning. awesome details.. i love it!!
                              
                              *Becks* <3
Pandor Pandor Mar 14, 2011
The story needs a tiny bit of proofreading/editing, but after that it definitely has the potential to become really good! The story sounds compelling, and the descriptions are amazing! Keep up the good work!
MissDiorCherie MissDiorCherie Mar 06, 2011
woow...this really good!! I love all the details I mean I actually can feel the battle the dude is goin through in his mind...Keep writing!! Oh and just suggestion...givin ur chapters names would make them stand out. :) lol anywho u got my vote!
nicollettenikki nicollettenikki Feb 26, 2011
His friends lied to him. This was very mysterious and I loved the contorting and twisted perspective of James himself. This story in and of itself is utterly creative and darkly genius on your part. I loved the suspicion of this and how it builds up and becomes intensive and wonderfully astounding! 
Angel_Eyes24 Angel_Eyes24 Feb 19, 2011
Woah could not finish it-it wasn't bad or anything.... It's just wayyyyy too much like my story...Like way too much, and I don't what to like subconsciously take any of your ideas or something, I just can't I feel to weird reading it.
paigemae23 paigemae23 Feb 16, 2011
Ha! I realy liked this and James seems like a really likable quirky character. He brings in an element of humor that isn't usualy present in this genre. I really enjoyed it. Voted. Xxx