James died. then a demon named Azael brought him back to life so he can visit the human world to absorb dark energy. James has to help him to get Azael out of his head and ends up battling demons and monsters.
Im sooo sorry it took so long to read your story. :( Its really good!! it has a great beginning. awesome details.. i love it!!
The story needs a tiny bit of proofreading/editing, but after that it definitely has the potential to become really good! The story sounds compelling, and the descriptions are amazing! Keep up the good work!
woow...this really good!! I love all the details I mean I actually can feel the battle the dude is goin through in his mind...Keep writing!! Oh and just suggestion...givin ur chapters names would make them stand out. :) lol anywho u got my vote!
His friends lied to him. This was very mysterious and I loved the contorting and twisted perspective of James himself. This story in and of itself is utterly creative and darkly genius on your part. I loved the suspicion of this and how it builds up and becomes intensive and wonderfully astounding!
Woah could not finish it-it wasn't bad or anything.... It's just wayyyyy too much like my story...Like way too much, and I don't what to like subconsciously take any of your ideas or something, I just can't I feel to weird reading it.
Ha! I realy liked this and James seems like a really likable quirky character. He brings in an element of humor that isn't usualy present in this genre. I really enjoyed it. Voted. Xxx