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Immortal Child

Immortal Child

147K Reads 1.3K Votes 28 Part Story
Carla Meyer By Carla_Meyer Completed

As the first female descendant of the first born vampire, Nerice, sixteen-year-old Roxanne Burns is plagued with the responsibility of restoring order in the supernatural world. With her cousin, Alexia and her boyfriend, Mike at her side, they ensue a journey that will change their lives forever. Ancestors of evil and good are at hand, and others seem to strive for a better life. Breaking the vampires' sun curse... the werewolves' moon curse... It's all a big mess and lethally dangerous. A war is on the loose, but who will win?

Mara_Woods Mara_Woods Jan 22, 2012
Great prologue. The main character is very blunt, I like that. This sounds like its gonna be good. Reading on :)
htcsc78 htcsc78 Jan 06, 2012
Very good preface I like it! I want to know more about how she was transformed, but offcourse that's next!
ThePoetryGirl ThePoetryGirl Nov 15, 2011
This is really interesting and I want to see where this story goes :).
coffeeandcourage coffeeandcourage Jul 05, 2011
I love it, I voted for every chapter now. I will read and comment later. Thanks for supporting me. So stay awesome! <3
VeraAnneWolf VeraAnneWolf Jul 04, 2011
Really good prologue. I like how blunt but honest your MC comes across as.
                              Also like the subtle hints about her past. Curious where this will lead. Voted. Reading on
Carla_Meyer Carla_Meyer Apr 24, 2011
@PeaceLoveAndUnicorns Thanks so much :) Glad you like it XxXx