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Hec Daevis By HecDaevis Updated Apr 24

Vance was an ex-criminal running from the Cross Syndication, an infamous criminal organization. Gabriel was the young fool who stumbled into a deadly situation ... and stayed.
  "Run until you're bleeding from the soles of your sore feet and the breath you had once inhaled is nothing but the hopeless, unavoidable, reminder of our defeat," Vance murmured bitterly. "Run because afraid was all we ever were ... and all we'll ever be."
  #4 Action
  [Book One of the Immorality Series]
  Warning: Graphic Violence, Mature Content, Dark Themes

Fangirl_Trash130 Fangirl_Trash130 3 days ago
Idkay but water bottles are pretty long in my country of the US. Unless you got them gold digging pockets, or they're mini sized, that's not possible.
ilovepeople2008 ilovepeople2008 Jun 20, 2016
This is such a great start to a story, very well written. I love it
OhMyGlobSoCliche189 OhMyGlobSoCliche189 Apr 28, 2016
Completely inappropriate, but anyone else thing of hot fuzz?
realkool7ricky realkool7ricky Aug 09, 2016
Love the start. Your storytelling is good. I thought I was there when Vance shoot and Gabriel save the the day. Thanks. ☺️
newamericana newamericana Jan 27, 2016
My innocent bby....... we'll change that real soon sweety don't you worry.
gingerdream gingerdream Dec 20, 2015
I think with this rewrite you started Gabriel off even more innocent than usual. I am so scared he is going to break. At this point we are just starting this crazy journey. For this rewrite chapter 1 is a lot stronger than before. It is both better thought out and better set out.