Run.

Run.

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Hec Daevis By HecDaevis Updated 3 days ago

Vance was an ex-criminal running from the Cross Syndication, an infamous criminal organization. Gabriel was the young fool who stumbled into a deadly situation ... and stayed.
  
  "Run until you're bleeding from the soles of your sore feet and the breath you had once inhaled is nothing but the hopeless, unavoidable, reminder of our defeat," Vance murmured bitterly. "Run because afraid was all we ever were ... and all we'll ever be."
  
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  #4 Action
  
  [Book One of the Immorality Series]
  
  Warning: Graphic Violence, Mature Content, Dark Themes

This is such a great start to a story, very well written. I love it
Completely inappropriate, but anyone else thing of hot fuzz?
Love the start. Your storytelling is good. I thought I was there when Vance shoot and Gabriel save the the day. Thanks. ☺️
My innocent bby....... we'll change that real soon sweety don't you worry.
gingerdream gingerdream Dec 20, 2015
I think with this rewrite you started Gabriel off even more innocent than usual. I am so scared he is going to break. At this point we are just starting this crazy journey. For this rewrite chapter 1 is a lot stronger than before. It is both better thought out and better set out.
Ryu-nee Ryu-nee Dec 11, 2015
What...I am confused...why is there only one chapter? You had like 50. What on earth did I miss?