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Spirit Animals ~ Betrayed

Spirit Animals ~ Betrayed

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Zεɾίƒ By Bryce_MacKenzie Completed

•The 1st Book of the Redemption Series•

~2nd book~ Reprisal~

~I would recommend reading the first series of Spirit Animals first, as those seven books is what this story is based on and revolves around.~

//Chapters 1-6 are more or less a backstory, and that is to why the story is slower to get to more 'interesting' parts. If you want to skip to chapter 7, you can, just note that you could possibly miss smaller details that are important later on.//

•Teasers-Not in any particular order•

"I looked down at the undisturbed, unfinished game of rock chess that Xak and I had started. I didn't want to reset it, just in case Xak came back. That way, we could continue from where we left off and not put all of our hard work to waste."

"Alix looked up at the bright moon; his armor shined like a star. He sighed. "I'm surprised too, but we can't go around and judge people based on who their family is, even if they are the daughter of The Jackal.""

"Bryce's face lit up, like he had an idea. "I'll be right back. Xak, hold her had will ya?" Bryce stood up, and left Xak holding my bruised hand. He opened his mouth like he was about to say something. "Be quiet." I snapped."


Did you ever wonder how is was like to be a Conqueror growing up? Being raised by them, fighting with them, forming...connections with them? Did you ever wonder what it was like to be the daughter of a mad man? The spawn of someone who is known for their demises?

Zerif isn't a likely parent, as he shouldn't be at all, but he is. MacKenzie is a victim, she is a flaw. She followed him wherever he went, until it happened. A betrayal. A forming of a traitor, she became. However, she wasn't alone. A group of allies stayed with her. They are lost. They are outcasts. 

They are on a death list. There's no turning back. All they can do is fight, but some things aren't always as they seem.

•Takes place- First series•

//I do not own Spirit Animals, canon characters, settings, etc. I only o

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Cupcake3313 Cupcake3313 Aug 23, 2017
Usually, instead of putting "5" we write "five", for numbers ten and under, above that we just put the number :)
Cupcake3313 Cupcake3313 Aug 23, 2017
Oh, and I noticed that for the first few paragraphs the sentences sounded kinda choppy from too many sentences and periods, you could try removing a few periods and adding commas instead