The Vampires Slave

The Vampires Slave

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Naturally-ThisCrazy By Naturally-ThisCrazy Completed

He was right behind me. He closed the door and locked it. I turn toward him And pull my hair back and tilt my neck. He laughs. "Actually we are gonna do things a little different." He says. He grabs my arm and flings me onto the bed like a rag doll. I gasp as he climbs over me. He sits on me, chuckling softly. "Oh, Reagan. You'll like this a lot." He says.

He grips the front of my shirt and literally rips it off. I gasp as the fabric rips like tissue in his hands. His cold hands ran over my stomach tracing soft lines. He leans in and smiles...

Love how it starts off full force, interesting starting point as they have already been master and slave for two years.
ok so lets read you then what do you have for me are you  better than what i have all ready read in my six years
flambo456 flambo456 Mar 14
This chapter was good. I recommend that for your future books you add spacing between the characters. Like this, 
                               
                              "Who is it?!", Aaron snaps.
                              
                              "Your 9-oh-clock sir".
                              
                              That would be very helpful in the future. Thanks!
emaleehaun emaleehaun Feb 20
That moment when everybody's like I love how the chapter started and. When I go to read it it's blank
*checks chapter*
                              Oh, yep. I was right, it's chapter one. Wow.
JazzyThePrincess JazzyThePrincess Jun 06, 2015
this is going to be the second time i read this book! loved it the first time!