Broken

Broken

74 Reads 3 Votes 3 Part Story
Liza the awesome By lizadancesandswims Updated May 28, 2012

When Daniel meets a beautiful but apparently troubled girl on his first day at a new school, he is determined to get through her defenses and find out what can possibly be upsetting such a beautiful soul. Will Naja let him in? Will he stay once he gets in? Or will he run, like Naja is convinced he will?

holdontilthenight holdontilthenight Mar 12, 2012
@lizadancesandswims hahaha your welcome :) and don't be sorry for you're spazziness lol, can't wait to read the next chapter! :D Xx
lizadancesandswims lizadancesandswims Mar 12, 2012
ps im working on my next upload now. Sorry for my spazziness but your gonna have to get used to it if your gonna read my stories and be my fan.
lizadancesandswims lizadancesandswims Mar 12, 2012
OH MY GOSH MY FIRST COMMENT! MY FIRST FAN!!!!!!! SOMEONE THINKS IMMA GOOD WRITER!!!!!! I am literally tearing up a little.....thank you so much!!!!!! YOU JUST MADE MY DAY! NO LIES YOU JUST MADE MY YEAR!!!!!
holdontilthenight holdontilthenight Mar 12, 2012
really good so far! you're a great writer and the main idea of the story is very interesting, upload soon! :D Xx
lizadancesandswims lizadancesandswims Mar 12, 2012
That made my day when I saw 10 reads! Please don't be shy! Comment! Even if you don't like it I would love to hear what you didn't like about it so I can improve my writing.