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Love Temptation

Love Temptation

2.5K Reads 68 Votes 16 Part Story
Jessica Lau By PrincyJessie Updated May 12, 2012

1920s the era of change, the era of seduction, obsession and every kind of dangerous
  Beautiful days often end in dangerous nights
   Four teens 
  Wealthy and charming 
 As they charm their way through the dangerous nights of Chicago
 Can they leave in one piece or will they will only end in beautiful nightmares?

  • vampire
  • werewolf
  • witch
PrincyJessie PrincyJessie Apr 11, 2012
@KissingTheSunlight Thank you mentor! I will improve it!
                              @SapphireMarie99 Thanks for reading I will correct my mistakes as soon as possible!
PrincyJessie PrincyJessie Apr 10, 2012
@KissingTheSunlight OOh my mentor I don't know if my description could top my beautiful but i will try my best! @SapphireMarie99  Thanks for commenting I just saw your comment silly me
SapphireMarie99 SapphireMarie99 Apr 10, 2012
This first part really brought in my attention!! I love they way you wrote it and I can't wait to read more!
KissingTheSunlight KissingTheSunlight Apr 08, 2012
@lightningjessie This was very good. All that I HAVE to say is words such as "reach", "raise". You could do present tense (harder to do) and say "reaches, raises" Or, the past tense (which I recommend) which would be: "reached, raised" Other than that, I've really enjoyed this story so far! :D
xxstardreamerxx xxstardreamerxx Apr 08, 2012
I like it! There was just one spelling error: "glamarous" should be "glamorous" But other than that good job! I like the ending of it.
PrincyJessie PrincyJessie Apr 08, 2012
@KissingTheSunlight YAYA! phew glad I got your attention lol