And Then They Came...

And Then They Came...

241 Reads 29 Votes 1 Part Story
Willow Kane By willowkane Updated May 01, 2017

This is a unique take on the #MyHandmaidsTale contest.

Enjoy.

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MaryFahey MaryFahey Jul 28, 2017
The twist at the end is heart wrenching. I though they would be left alone  -  how dreadful for both her and her mother.
amberkbryant amberkbryant Jul 18, 2017
Wow! I can see why you made the top 25 list. The 2nd person narrative brought me right into the story and the emotions were bursting from the page... The girl's strength, vulnerability and perseverance are all present at the end...
                              
                              congrats on making the list!
StoryofAshlyn StoryofAshlyn Jun 08, 2017
Terrifying but captivating. Definitely has my vote for the contest - best of luck!
Lady_JLaw Lady_JLaw Mar 08, 2018
This is really cool. Glad I found it. Very evocative...which is not easy to do.
J-D-Jacobs J-D-Jacobs Jun 20, 2017
I love how well you captured how everyone's eyes are on you, them, the other... Great job! Best of luck in the contest!☺
Fairytale_Fabler Fairytale_Fabler May 02, 2017
This stands out for its POV. Second person is sometimes hard to pull off, but you made it happen smoothly and subtly. The last few lines are particularly haunting and so is your book cover. Nice presentation all around. Best of luck with your entry. 😀